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Fall Asleep
Contributed by
valek
on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 10:54:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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circumstance entrance all that participate in the dance
the corridor is smiling at you once again
molested by this life induced trance
to take away all your guns would be a sin
this show has gone way to ******* far
see the light shining far into your past
just before you get hit by the car
knowing your future just couldnt last
fall asleep at ease, finding yourself to wake up alone
how can anything be what you want it to be
when all that is false is all that you've known
don't let go of your laughing tree
climb up the hallway to get to your point of perfection
tell your lies and forget about their deception
fell the rope around your neck, then you'll know what to do
then you'll understand i just ******* hate to love you
think that your crying, bloods pouring out your eyes
know that i'm dying, killed by the holy's lies
your house flooded in crimson, murderers are out tonight
guilty of nothing but treason, how can you doubt your hindsight
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valek
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2005-01-26 10:54:43]
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Re: Fall Asleep
(User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 11:14:17 AM AEST
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| Not to bad..I liked the feel of it quite a bit..Adding the profanity messed it up since they block it out..And myself am a fan of anything profane..But beyond that very good. |
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Re: Fall Asleep
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 12:38:27 PM AEST
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| very colorful.. I rarely read profanity unless it's mine.. |
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