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when you critique a poem
Contributed by
hughie610
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Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 10:54:44 AM in AEST
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When you critique a poem
Be sure of the fact
And dont be too harsh
Use a little tact
We as poets
Write to satisfy our need
So be tender with us
And eventually we will succeed
I write of life
And from the heart
And I will do until I depart
We all know that
To be a good poet is in vain
However encourage us
To ease the pain
Author Hewitt hardy January 25 2005
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2005-01-26 10:54:44]
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Re: when you critique a poem
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by marshmalloska on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 01:20:04 PM AEST
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| That was great, a witty subject matter too. And im not just trying to adhere to you guidelines either =) |
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Re: when you critique a poem
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 01:39:34 PM AEST
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I believe that everyone here craves (however secretly) recognition for their expression. This is the 'need' you talk of. Its often the topic of forum debate, this parody of truthfulness, when faced with insincerity beneath a poorly expressed and expounded item of poetry.
I think it is far more important to be fair, than to be tender.
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Re: when you critique a poem
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 07:01:35 PM AEST
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know your true motives and go 4 it, the rest will work it self out . . .
Dorian Chambers
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Re: when you critique a poem
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by sojourner on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 10:48:15 PM AEST
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Nice poem,well written and to the point,and how true your words,for all that write need encouragement once in awhile.
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Re: when you critique a poem
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by afterdark on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:48:23 PM AEST
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| I'm sorry but I would prefer to be honest and real about my comments then sweet and tender..That is the problem with people who have Disabilities they get told they are normal,When in reality they are far from. |
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Re: when you critique a poem
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 03:18:58 PM AEST
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| This poem is a great word of advice. I definately agree with you. Great write. |
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