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cisneros
Contributed by
frannykilledzooey
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Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 06:46:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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today we go to the baker and get bread
the bread is flat bread
there is no not flat bread
not since the war is there no not flat bread
the war is bad for all of us we say
some people in the street cheer the war
"tan, tan!" they say
we don't understand the "tan, tan!" to the war
the war is bad for all of us we say
sometimes we think these people
don't understand the war
or don't want the not flat bread
and instead want the war
we don't understand want the war
the war is bad for all of us we say
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2005-01-26 18:46:57]
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Re: cisneros
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by Maxximus on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 08:39:07 PM AEST
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| good stuff.. I can sense the personal tragedy you interjected. A relevant poem to times present and passed. No matter, war is bad for all of us. |
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