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ever after
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:09:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Happily ever aftr
thats how they want you
to think
but its not
not at all
in reality
the death
the tears
and the fears
through it all
we still go on
the broken hearts
cheating friends
so much pain
it never ends
the fake smiles
the make everything
"okay"
but not for you
because you know
the pain never leaves
bright and cheery
but oh so weary
beacause inside
your heart is breaking
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2005-01-26 21:09:33]
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Re: ever after
(User Rating: 1 )
by morgana on
Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 03:18:28 AM AEST
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| freat write...love the flow...and...emotion |
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Re: ever after
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 03:57:11 PM AEST
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| i disagree a little with the first comment, i think the poem is a bit choppy in its flow, but the last few lines run together nicely. this is a very relatable topic, and might want to go with a title about how life is unpredictable or not as it seems. |
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