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My Only Weakness
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
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Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:31:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Its so hard to breathe
Whenever youre around
I become so lost in you
That I cannot make a sound
My heart is so broken
I can feel it bleeding inside
The pain is so unbearable
I would have rather died
Tears swell up behind my eyes
But I know I cannot let them go
You are my only weakness
But I will not let it show
You hold so much power
Over everything in me
With just a blink of your eyes
I could completely cease to be
The power that you hold
Shall remain my little secret
Deep inside my heart
And you will never know it
Copyright ©
CrimsonTears
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2005-01-26 21:31:10]
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Re: My Only Weakness
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 10:20:56 PM AEST
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| I felt this way B4, still do a little, here and there but this is a great poem, I relate and I love everything thing about this one. |
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Re: My Only Weakness
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by Rxqueen on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 11:37:25 PM AEST
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You hold so much power
Over everything in me
With just a blink of your eyes
I could completely cease to be
I love this stanza! It was a ver heart wrenching peice. I swear unrequited (sp?) love is the worst thing in the whole entire world. But it makes for good writing. |
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Re: My Only Weakness
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by Dizza_13 on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 03:37:04 AM AEST
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beautiful write. I think we've all felt this way at some
point in our lives, i know that i have. I've writin a poem
similar to this that you might want to have a look at
its called "urequited love". not as good as this but
thats my writing for you. keep up the good work.
diz |
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Re: My Only Weakness
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by brokenheartsbleed on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 11:42:18 PM AEST
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| this is exactly how i feel. great job. |
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