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Magnetic Mayhem
Contributed by
rxqueen
on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 11:04:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
InternetLove
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Across modems and phone lines
twisted cables and tangled wires
wrapping me up like creeping vines
burning my soul like midnight fires
Though I cannot place the face
and these emotions are surreal
you bring me to a foriegn place;
an electricity I undoubtedly feel
I would climb into my harddrive today
If you promise to download me
travel the internet super highway
so on your laptop I could be
Braving magnetic mayhem
for you to double click
I will spread like a virus femme
if only you will insert your disk
We are only as far apart
as the time it takes to type
so now you know my heart,
you unknowinlgy did swipe
If I IM you on your PC
will you let me direct connect
or will you think of me
as a worm that will infect?
In the vastness of this electronic realm
you are but a ghost in eternal space
but something has me overwhelmed,
though I have never seen your face.
Copyright ©
rxqueen
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2005-01-26 23:04:26]
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Re: Magnetic Mayhem
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 11:14:52 PM AEST
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*chuckles* You go, J! This was a great write, mixing the computer thing with romance. ;-)
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Re: Magnetic Mayhem
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 01:03:06 AM AEST
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| LMAO! To funny, and yet so sweet. But seriously, funny |
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Re: Magnetic Mayhem
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 03:53:18 AM AEST
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LMAO im sure Mothy will adore this.
I like this J its re-freshing to read and i liked to combination you did with the computer and the love bug.
Good writing sweets
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Re: Magnetic Mayhem
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 09:11:27 AM AEST
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Promiscuity at its best.
Compelling read, Rx. |
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Re: Magnetic Mayhem
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 07:07:41 PM AEST
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More.
I will swim across the Pacific
to insert my
dankon
if it pleases you.
The only thing that will stop me is a
a shark with a toothpick sticking out of its mouth.
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Re: Magnetic Mayhem
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 09:21:15 PM AEST
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So beautiful!
Spazzo |
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