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GOTH SLAVES
Contributed by
KOZMICSPIRID
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Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 11:22:21 PM in AEST
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SELF INDUCED ESTEEM
BRINGING YOU CLOSER
TO YOUR POWERFULL DREAM
DIVISION OF THOUGHTS
CONCEALMENT OF GOTHS
PROBLEMS UNADRESSED
KEEPING YOU DEPRESSED
FIND THE LIGHT
FORGET THE NIGHT
GET OFF THE WAGON
BRING THE DRAGON
THE SCENE
UNREAL
ORIGINALITY WAS SCARCE
AMONG THE CREATURES OF BELTS
FETISH DREAMS
IMMORAL THEMES
GATHERING OF SINS
SHOW FULL OF GRINS
HER DEVIOUS WAYS
KEPT ME AMAZED
STARING FROM DISTANCE
AT THE NEGATIVE PLAGUE
Copyright ©
KOZMICSPIRID
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2005-01-26 23:22:21]
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Re: GOTH SLAVES
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 11:27:52 PM AEST
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| id rather die from the negative plague than be delusional, but i still liked your message and how you wrote this. |
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Re: GOTH SLAVES
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 11:40:39 PM AEST
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| as a poem this is good, but the subject matter...I'll leave it alone, I don't want to offend you. |
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Re: GOTH SLAVES
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 11:50:47 PM AEST
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As good as the poem was I have to say that if there were no pain in me, I might not write at all if I could just be filled with contentment. No one ever accomplished much sitting around just being a cow. There has to be some need, some discontentment that drives people to do worthwhile things.
But you had to know we'd say this, didn't you?
All the best... |
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Re: GOTH SLAVES
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by Bridget_theMidget_Powerz on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 03:03:39 AM AEST
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No thanks, I rather like the dark side.
Good poem though! |
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Re: GOTH SLAVES
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by subchild on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 08:40:05 AM AEST
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| You have no feel to your poem here..It reads like a goth how to list.. |
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Re: GOTH SLAVES
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 08:15:28 PM AEST
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| Shall we all become born again sheep as well..***** on your post. |
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Re: GOTH SLAVES
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:32:03 AM AEST
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| I agree with subchild and afterdark.May I make a suggestion?{ok}how about you come out of the light and into the dark,jump on in hun the "blood" {I mean water,lol} is fine! |
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Re: GOTH SLAVES
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by KOZMICSPIRID on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 04:09:25 PM AEST
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sounds like i hit a soft spot--or 2 ---word up4me---
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Re: GOTH SLAVES
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by Omen on
Thursday, 11th March 2010 @ 06:11:33 AM AEST
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| Ying and Yang, The light needs the darkness to survive my friend .. Nice writting but I strong think this subject matter is not for you .... sorry. |
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