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Contributed by
rhino33
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Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 11:00:21 AM in AEST
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Hide, take me please
For I cannot face another round
My life has been full of many stages
Reaching out asking 'lock me in a cage'
Close my eyes, wish that I could find some space
To hide
Burdened days cloud my already blurred eyes
The sun no longer remains in my skies
The darkness is over whelming, tossing and turning
Lying wide awake
Hold my breath; wish that I could find some place
To hide
Hide, take me please
I won't face another round.
Erik Btzin
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2005-01-27 11:00:21]
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Re: Hide
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by nightwolf on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 02:32:04 PM AEST
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| its good. it shows alot of emotion and feeling |
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