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i have been there
Contributed by
nightwolf
on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 02:26:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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i have been there
to the point of where the medow
falls under light shadow
i have been there
where the desert sky
hangs over the mountain range wide
i have been there
i have felt the sand in my toes
listened to the ocean as the soft wind blows
i have been there
felt the cool breez of the deep forest
smelled the pine sapand heard the birds in chorus
i have been there
in my dreams
to the end of the earth and back
and seen all things
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nightwolf
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2005-01-27 14:26:20]
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Re: i have been there
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by Drowning_Dreams on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 09:18:12 AM AEST
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| Wow, great poem. You made it seem like I was there. Interesting. I like your work. |
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Re: i have been there
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by emystar on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 05:03:54 PM AEST
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Now this one touched me so deep that it makes my heart bleed inside.
It's a masterpeice of heavenly beauty in it's own right but it flows with the melody of a masterpeice. Your writing reminds me of a dear, dear friend of mine.
Hang in there you'll see it once again.
Take it easy on yourself 'cause the world beats us down enuff that we don't need to do it. Never loose hope, my friend! By all means never stop writing!
luv, huggs, smiles, faith, hope, joy, peace, prayer,
emy
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Re: i have been there
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by shelby on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 08:03:59 PM AEST
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this is beautiful
Michelle |
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