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Not Very Well
Contributed by
tiggytom
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Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 04:24:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A fire without a heart
Takes me back to the start
From the empty womb
To the crowded tomb
Please Wait for me
I'll be there soon
Pulled into a world
Without any feelings
Can't remember
Our past meetings
To be born is to die
Don't believe all the hype
Diseased by birth
Cured by death
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tiggytom
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2005-01-27 16:24:55]
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Re: Not Very Well
(User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 06:36:37 PM AEST
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| this is rather dark but well written. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Not Very Well
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by Maxximus on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 06:11:46 PM AEST
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| dying from the day we are born... sad but true. Life can be viewed in many ways and it's intent to many ends, you seemed to capture one here that worked out nicely. Good job. |
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