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Sadistic Romance Part IV- Give Up
Contributed by
EternalNight4x
on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 04:26:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Hey eyes they burned with vivid fear
Down her cheek rolled a single tear
Her naked body plunged to the ground
From her wound blood spilt around
Clasped in his hands was a frigid blade
Stained with the blood from the wound it made
Her skin turned ashen, colored drained from her eyes
She had not the energy left to cry
Her head felt light
Sucked into the night
tis pointless to fight
Nothings alright
She longed to hurt him and cause him torment
Yet he merely smiled at her feeble attempt
Losing all hope she slipped away
And prayed she wouldnt awake the next day
She had no such luck, death was not his intent
To cause bitter pain was what he had meant
So at the end of the day she would fade away
Only to await more suffering the next day
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Re: Sadistic Romance Part IV- Give Up
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 04:16:48 AM AEST
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i cant believe this.
Your work!
We have the exact style.
Vocab.
Wow.
Separated at birth, you and I?
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