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butterflies
Contributed by
ruka
on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 04:27:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Everytime i see you i get these butterflies that makes my stomache flip inside then you're the only image that i see in my eyes then everything just freezes even time everytime you touch me my knees lock, and my palms seem to sweat and i breathe out nothing but shallow breaths everytime you're near my stomache brews these butterflies their wings make me soar into the heavenly skies everytime i feel your kiss and the gentle taste of your lips i realize they're the only things in this world i would miss just the simple thought of you being around makes these butterflies flip my stomache upside down when you glance at me your eyes make me smile then these butterflies inside start going wild the only thing ifeel when i'm around you are these butterflies brewing just for you
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2005-01-27 16:27:03] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: butterflies
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 04:29:00 PM AEST (User
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This was better then your last post to me..It was simple and all of the sweet stuff..But it was done in a very cool way..Good poem. |
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Re: butterflies
(User Rating: 1 ) by Gothchyk on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 06:03:49 PM AEST (User
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great write.
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Re: butterflies
(User Rating: 1 ) by breny on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 06:24:59 PM AEST (User
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i know the feeling very well. great poem!
~Bren~
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Re: butterflies
(User Rating: 1 ) by Raven on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 07:57:01 PM AEST (User
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very good! sounds like your in love! |
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