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Life
Contributed by
butterat_zool
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Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 06:14:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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They told me today
that my heart is growing weak.
It still feels the same,
and I can still love,
but they tell me that now
it takes seventy-five beats
to do what my heart
could once accomplish in sixty.
They told me today
that its on its way out.
My cars engine, that is.
It still purrs alright,
it just coughs every once in a while as well,
but they tell me that now
it goes two-hundred fifty miles
off of what could once
take her three-fifty.
I guess thats just the way things go
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Re: Life
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 06:17:12 PM AEST
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| A neat little work about the facts of life. Interesting metaphors. |
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Re: Life
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by KantKureLyfe on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 04:04:14 PM AEST
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| Things have a habbit of falling in and out of place beyond our control. And true, thats just the way things go sometimes. Good comparison going on too .. Ellis .. |
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