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Noblest Of Knights
Contributed by
Cynthia
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Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 06:43:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
mythology
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Such a brave knight
was he,
to give up his life
for me.
On a horse he did ride
with sword in hand,
such a battle he did fight
trying to protect his land.
It was a battle to be won
his life he did give,
beneath the hottest of suns
faithful life he had lived.
A man I loved like no other
always looked out for me,
he was my loving father
the last of my family.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Jan.23/2005
Copyright ©
Cynthia
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2005-01-27 18:43:41]
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Re: Noblest Of Knights
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by emystar on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 07:12:03 PM AEST
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Oh me this is sad but a fine tribute to your father. I'm sure he's looking over your shoulder smiling with your mom so proud of u-n-this write.
Did he pass away recently?
I do know how it feels to loose a father mine was my tower of strength. He was the only man that iever tottally trusted.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Noblest Of Knights
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 10:25:02 PM AEST
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the beauty in this poem speaks 4 it's self . . .
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Re: Noblest Of Knights
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by Baronhawk on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 03:33:03 PM AEST
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Dear maiden,
I rode in here expecting tales of high adventure and great deeds such as dragon slaying, massive battles and damsel rescues... I am somewhat hung up on the concept and story of knights... however inside of here I found something much more dearer than pseudo-history or fantasy but the earnest and simple but strong affection for a great DAD... and I am quite moved...what a beautifully tender write.. though I must say that while I would agree that one's dad is perhaps th enoblest of all knights to most persons... you did misleadth me here with your title... but nevermind... it was worth the click. Thanks for the experience and this does make me think of my dear departed dad. |
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Re: Noblest Of Knights
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 05:02:15 PM AEST
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| To all those that read. This write is not about my father. I should have said something earlier, but already had a comment before hand. I had an idea in my head and went with it. Thank you anyway for reading and commenting. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Noblest Of Knights
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 06:14:52 PM AEST
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beautiful, i love knight poems! cynthia:) hugs n' love nessa
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