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Juliet's Lie
Contributed by
raven
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Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 06:59:13 PM in AEST
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LostLove
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The best thing I ever knew ended up being a lie. The day went black and the fire, burnt out. With the fire your words lost meaning. The words that were like a drug. They felt so good but ended up killing me. Why did you speak the words that didnt mean a thing...?
Shattered heart and the darkest days, thats what you left me with. I had no choice but to make that mistake, now the pain continues to grow like an electrifying shock through my bones. I am left to die with this broken heart.
The best thing that I ever heard, you took back. Its not a gift so dont wrap it up. Im not sure if this makes sense but just so you know...my heart is dead, my spirit gone, and my life a wreck. Its like Romeo and Juliet but only one of us ended up dead. The warehouse lights in my heart still flicker but im afraid its time to fall, fall from the edge where i have been hanging........you already let me fall, dont bother catching me.
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Re: Juliet's Lie
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by emystar on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 07:27:07 PM AEST
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Oh me so very sad but written well.
A masterpeice as I can certainly relate but in my case it would be Romeo's lie.
Hang tuff friend/
hugss, luv, strength,
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