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Her mistake
Contributed by
Jishes_4_ever
on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 10:51:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The other night was like a dream to her
She felt like there was nothing better then him
He was all she wanted
He was all she cared about
She never thought they would break up
She never saw it comming
He fell in love with someone else
Leaving her by herself
She cries every night before she goes to bed
It's how she gets to sleep at night
But even in her dreams she sees his face
What she wouldn't give to just erase it all from her life
She doesn't want him in her head anymore
She just wants this all to be over
She knows she'll never be with him again
She wouldn't even if he asked her
She knows what he's like now
And she won't make another mistake like that again
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2005-01-27 22:51:43]
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Re: Her mistake
(User Rating: 1 )
by Raven on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 10:55:13 PM AEST
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| very good! I loved it!!! |
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Re: Her mistake
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:19:19 AM AEST
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| It's pretty good. Keep writing. Cheers! |
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