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The Pain You Cause
Contributed by
XxCrYiNg4YoUxX
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Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 11:31:19 PM in AEST
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The pain inside grows and hurts more each day. Somedays worse,others better. Wherther good or bad it's there.When it will be realeased and torn away forever i may never know! As I cut my waiting skin I think about what you do to me. How you cause this hurt and frustration. As i look back on the good times I realize the ones that make me smile hurt the worst. When I think about the way you make me feel, I cry more that ever it gives me what I need to cut, deeper than the time before, I watch the blood trickle down i laugh and think it must all be over soon.
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Re: The Pain You Cause
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 11:39:06 PM AEST
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| needs work grammar wise. concept wise, this is excellent. |
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Re: The Pain You Cause
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by HobGobby on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 02:42:32 AM AEST
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| I like the wording, but cutting is a touchy topic for me... otherwise i love it :) |
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