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Closed
Contributed by
Maxximus
on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:51:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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In the night it all feels so plain
Not for lack of luster
But for its depth in clarity
Cool air in and hot thoughts out
My eyes open finally in that pale moon light
I taste of complexion
But do not suffer its weight
I know emotion
But lack its pain
This is no longer strange to me
What was alien
Now bears a familiar face
What wrought my soul
Now lies at my feet
One thing however remains a puzzle
One that I consider when all is gone
How was it possible
For this blindness to have lasted
As long as I have stood in the dark?
Copyright ©
Maxximus
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2005-01-28 00:51:02]
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Re: Closed
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 01:22:00 AM AEST
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| Interesting images of someone standing outside somewhere in the night thinking. I like it. Cheers! |
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Re: Closed
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by DoubleS on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2012 @ 07:57:51 AM AEST
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| Nice write, I liked it a lot, keep up to great stuff |
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