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Darkness
Contributed by
marshmalloska
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Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 09:44:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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And as you walk away draw the darkness around you like a cloak
Let it be your armour against the spears of hate they throw at your back
Let it be your protection against the sting of the laughter that echoes in their wake
Let is be the mask that stops the tears of acid that threaten to spill from you eyes from falling onto your face and burning a hole in your heart
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2005-01-28 09:44:29] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stitch on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 09:48:23 AM AEST (User
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You're missing an "r" in the third from the last line, but that's all. This is an excellent write.
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Re: Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 10:41:34 AM AEST (User
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It is good besides that one letter..I would have liked it a bit more tragic or dark but that is simply my taste..It was worded well and had great feel to it.. |
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Re: Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:32:23 PM AEST (User
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beautiful, lovely style and flow:) hugs n' love nessa
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