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The Opened Door
Contributed by
syloss
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Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 11:46:26 AM in AEST
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For a man that was empty and with out feeling,
You were an angel sent from far above,
I thought I was done learning about the heart,
You taught me that I could still love,
In a death lock of total apathy,
I've persevered though my strife,
The lonely shadow of my existence,
with no emotion was not a real life.
Day by day I fell further from light,
You opened my Pandora's box which contained,
All the pain and pent up anguish,
That at some point I learned to refrain.
With all of these emotions all out at once,
I felt like a hurricane and a forest fire out of control,
Out of my dreary non-existent coma i was pulled,
At once my life was great and a hellhole.
You opened up the door to love and pain,
This great new door you brought, I went through,
But, the hurricane is over the forest fire has burned out,
Quietly listen, life continues, Jenn, thank you.
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syloss
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2005-01-28 11:46:26]
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Re: The Opened Door
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 11:57:34 AM AEST
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| very sad and lovely. |
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Re: The Opened Door
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by autumngreeneyes on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:32:51 PM AEST
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| I ..don't know what to say.. |
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Re: The Opened Door
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 01:45:41 PM AEST
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This is lovely, so very sweet.
I guess there is someone for everyoone, always someone who saves us in some way or another.
Very loving write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: The Opened Door
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by O7NeVeS on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 09:56:48 PM AEST
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| Awwww......TD |
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