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Standing Still.
Contributed by
Baronhawk
on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 02:57:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I have stood here
well before
stayed a while
remaining all along
I remember how
I came to be
when I arrived
and still remain
I am here
ever since
still here
standing still.
looking around
things evolve
people change
nothing remains
no one does
nothing will
times change
fate's refrain
but I am here
in this place
upon the same
standing still.
with every step
of every feet
I will return
to the same
to this place
to this game
no matter how
which way or when
in the end
I am here again
standing still.
Everything I do
everyone I meet
every dream I have
every hope I tried
every bit of me
all of it will be
soon and always
come again
to this very place
to this now and then
everything will end
with me right here
standing still.
Copyright ©
Baronhawk
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2005-01-28 14:57:49]
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Re: Standing Still.
(User Rating: 1 )
by jillian_phan on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 03:46:53 PM AEST
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| i like your poem, it reminded me of e.e.*****s when i first read it... a quick and confusing but senseful poem |
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Re: Standing Still.
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 06:56:42 PM AEST
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Sometimes, I fell that the world is rushing by me, and I am standing still.
Though, I wish I could catch it, and ride along with life, you seem to wish to stay still...
Am I right?
Thoughtful write BH.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Standing Still.
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by Horsecrzy13 on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 12:45:30 PM AEST
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| I liked it. |
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Re: Standing Still.
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by Horsecrzy13 on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 12:45:34 PM AEST
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| I liked it. |
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