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Can you tell me...
Contributed by
jillian_phan
on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 04:17:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Can you tell me...
Can you tell me how to live life?
Sometimes I think my life is a mistake,
Drifted down and brought to fate.
With so many talents I maintain,
It takes time to study the skill,
But then again here comes another incident,
Like usual its my fault,
Therefore all my future plans fall apart.
Tears drop slowly then, continuing rapidly.
What to do, with no one behind you.
My mother tells me to pray,
Although, Ive tried that too much,
Ive tried too hard in life,
And I believe that soon is my time.
Will God rescue me?
Thats only a question I make,
Many questions Ive asked,
Many answered too late.
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jillian_phan
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2005-01-28 16:17:17]
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Re: Can you tell me...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 04:19:26 PM AEST
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| I wish I could. *sighs* It doesn't get any easier, I think. All good questions. Blessings. |
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Re: Can you tell me...
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 06:37:19 PM AEST
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I guess we all have these questions....
I don't know when we find the answers. I think that is what living is all about though. Learning.
Great write, I'm sure everyone can relate to it somehow.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Can you tell me...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 07:34:48 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful. I think we all question these things at one point in time or another. Great work. |
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