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Lures of Words
Contributed by
Jezabel
on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 05:02:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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I am
The skeptic
Looking
At you
With eyes open
I hear
Hints
And lures
From your mind
To my ears.
But I've
Seen signs
Of insincerity
Before.
Don't trust
Your lips
To hold me.
Lurid thoughts
Isolate me
Then
The erotic
Overtakes me.
Stone solid
I stand
Waiting
For
The other hand.
Copyright ©
Jezabel
... [
2005-01-28 17:02:07]
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Re: Lures of Words
(User Rating: 1 )
by jillian_phan on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 05:46:34 PM AEST
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| it's good, |
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Re: Lures of Words
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 06:17:32 PM AEST
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Wow, I like this.
I love the style, and the flow is without flaw.
I am
The skeptic
Looking
At you
With eyes open
I adore that part.
*hugs* Phil xxx
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Re: Lures of Words
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 07:57:46 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this. It's a short write, but good. Keep writing. Cheers! |
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Re: Lures of Words
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by SilmorilM on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 05:35:30 AM AEST
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| I've felt exactly the same quite a few times, nicely put though. I really like the way u write. I'm eager for more... |
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