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Beautiful night
Contributed by
Kalyle
on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 07:23:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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I lift my soul up to the sky On the twilight of this great night As I watch the birds as they take flight On this warm dramatic night When my spirit on new life.
On this beautiful night I look upon the sky clustered with stars Of galaxies so far away yet so close to us Its no wonder why we dream at night And no wonder why the spirit strives at night As they visit these worlds when we lay at night.
No demons of which for us to fight this night And no dogging in the ground with that old knife For on a night like this is when the spirit truly takes life And shines with Gods great light On this most beautiful night.
Copyright ©
Kalyle
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2005-01-28 19:23:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Beautiful night
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 07:25:07 PM AEST (User
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This made me smile. You painted such a beautiful image here with your words. Great work. |
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Re: Beautiful night
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 07:34:45 PM AEST (User
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peaceful write
Michelle |
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Re: Beautiful night
(User Rating: 1 ) by TheNextRobertFrost on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 09:03:12 PM AEST (User
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Very peacful. I'd like a night like this sometime, maybe during the summer when it shows a hint of warming up down here in NH.
Best wishes for you poetry
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Re: Beautiful night
(User Rating: 1 ) by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 12:16:46 PM AEST (User
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at the risk of sounding redundant, another beauty.
Dorian Chambers
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