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real dreams
Contributed by
blackholesun
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Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 12:15:41 AM in AEST
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a feeling i never had before,
you opened my mind and my hearts door,
nevermore shall i wait,
i found you at last it wasnt too late,
my soul mate,
my love my friend,
i want to hold you till the bitter end,
cradle your tears in a vile,do my best to make you smile.
walk with you evry mile,
stand with you through evry trial.
i will be with you soon,we can make love under your moon,
kiss me and never let go,
look in my eyes and feel my cries,
hold my hand while i scream.
be my dream
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Re: real dreams
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by breny on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 12:27:33 AM AEST
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| beautiful poem. very well written : ) |
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Re: real dreams
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by lil_noel09 on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 01:12:15 AM AEST
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| very good write! may you and your soulmate be blessed on your life together! |
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Re: real dreams
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by Ivy on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 02:15:59 AM AEST
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| nice write. |
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Re: real dreams
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 08:07:33 AM AEST
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What a sweet write, i just love the wat you wrote it. Im having butterflies at the thought of the love you shared.
Jane x |
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