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Savior
Contributed by
blueeyedevil13
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Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 02:45:42 AM in AEST
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Little did you know my savior was you
But I guess saviors need a savior too
You made me feel high when I was low
Without you life passes so slow
You saved me from all the lies
But I guess in the end all saviors must die
Saviors are thought to last forever
My attempt to save you was a failed endeavor
Why did my savior have to go?
Why did you do it, I'll never know
Did your savior end up like you?
Did they commit suicide too?
I never got to tell you
How much you got me through
This debt can never be re-paid
Although I would have tried if you had stayed
I always thought my savior would be here
To wipe away my tears and erase my fear
I was never held up by strings
You were always my wings
I thought you knew
But I guess saviors need a savior too
I wish someone told me, instead of all the lies
That someday my savior would have to die
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Re: Savior
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by Xnoybis on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 03:04:25 AM AEST
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| Wow, that's pretty damn powerful. Thanks for sharing, and I'm sorry for your loss. I know both must have been tremendously difficult. I hope writing this helped at least in some small fashion. |
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Re: Savior
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 07:50:45 AM AEST
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This is so sad, im so sorry for your loss.
But you have writen this so well, i can feel your emotions and pain in each line.
Thank you for puring out your feelings in this incredible write.
*Hugs*
Jane x |
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