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She----------God of mine
Contributed by
havi
on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You -------God of others'
She ------ God of mine.
I am too a part of your universe.
Then tell me,
who is almighty for me?
like humans in this era,
I do reflect one God in my reflections
as history in every era,
has been hilighted each new God.
Neither I adore moon nor sun.
Neither I adore fire nor sea.
I am a human ,
I do adore your humanity.
Then tell me, who is
almighty for me
Copyright ©
havi
... [
2002-12-07 17:00:00]
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Re: She----------God of mine
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by yellow_sundragon on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 09:16:15 PM AEST
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This is good. I love the way you bring out the confusion. I really like this.
YS |
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Re: She----------God of mine
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by havi on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 05:36:32 AM AEST
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Dear yellow_sundragon !
How r u ?
Thank u very much for liking my poetry. plz send your further suggestions to so that I can improve my poetry standard.
My real name is " Saeed " , "Havi" is my poetic-nick name.
I am muslim by religion n from Pakistan.
My msn Id is " saeedhavi@hotmail.com"
Plz introduce yourself.
with best wishes
yours
Havi
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Re: She----------God of mine
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by Jessica_Saini on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 10:25:36 AM AEST
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| I thought this poem was sweet. It reminds me of a quote... "Man has his will, but woman has her way". I wish I could remember who said that. Anyway, great write:-) |
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