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Untitled
Contributed by
poltarruski
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Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 04:25:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The tips of fingers, points of light, pulsing, tracing lines upon skin Seven candles burn in the silence of night Angular shapes formed from shades Of darkness Arching down and curving about The moment Gasped and expelled, tumbling, tossed To and fro Pink lips, touched Seven candle burn showing two shaded shapes, receding
Days, consumed by moments lost Ghosts staggering across a field of vision Dancing, horrid mimicry decrying the iniquities of their own illusion Consumed upon consuming, torrents of derision Stopped
Moments pass, untouched A forest sways in the quiet breath of consciousness Life, happening, happens Stuttering glimpses wink in and out, faster and faster Until they are pouring forth in a continuum of coherency A great crescendo happening without end Sublime moments, punctuations to a glorious universe All coalescing and falling to entropy only to reform Wildly and with beautiful meaning A field of vision becomes A grassy hill with the stars pouring forth from the sky becomes A single walk in a series of walks down a wonderfully average path becomes Every moment in the a day of a life
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Xnoybis on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 04:40:56 AM AEST (User
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I love a poem that defines its own rhythm. I don't think there's a lot of understanding/appreciation of such these days.
Reminds me of how nice it is to be in love, or in the act of..great expression. I wouldn't change a thing. |
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 07:41:30 AM AEST (User
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What a beautiful write, i can honestly say this just gave me the nicest warm feeling i have had in ages.
Great write i just loved this.
Jane x |
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 10:42:25 AM AEST (User
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very nice, I just think this deserves a title. |
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