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Let Me Go
Contributed by
Jane_Doe
on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 04:48:11 AM in AEST
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Suffocate me.
Crowd me with your over-bearing,
Muffle my breathing with your constant ignorance,
Don't you dare ever accept me for who I am.
Cage me.
Tuck me into my bed of chains,
Keep me away from all that I enjoy,
Watch me rot in the presence of the source of my depression.
Frighten me.
Give me a fear to disobey,
Install a never-ending worry,
Cause me to look over my shoulder everwhere I go.
Love me.
Explain to be that it's because you care,
Lie to me that you have good reasons,
Protect me from a world built from your pessimism.
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Jane_Doe
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2005-01-29 04:48:11]
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Re: Let Me Go
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 07:38:31 AM AEST
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Wow what a sad poem, you have writen this so well.
Im sure a lot of the members here can relate to this beautiful write of yours.
Thanks for posting and i hope to read more of your works soon.
Jane x |
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Re: Let Me Go
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by xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 11:45:07 AM AEST
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A very powerful emotional poem, well done. Im sorry to hear that your parents are like this to you but if it's any reassurance I live with my grandparents and by me reading this poem it made me think of how they treat me like this too.
They always make me inferior to what I am at times and tell me very hurtful things so I know how it feels.
If you ever need to talk message me on here. Hope to hear some more poetry from you soon. Take care........
Lots of love
xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx
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Re: Let Me Go
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by UnlovedChild on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 04:41:38 AM AEST
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| Very emotional, easy to relate to poem. |
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