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Noone
Contributed by
noone
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Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 05:48:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I begin to thinkshould I talk? but whats the point
Noone understands the pain I feel inside.
Dull eyes look up then quickly down again.
Sadness slowly eats away at me until there is nothing left,
Dont trust, dont speak.
Be still, be quiet, be nothing.
Nothing.
I look at my face in the shining mirror,
Then down at my scars,
How did it come to this?
Why werent you there to help me?
I fight internally not to be happy, not to care, but the craving is too much to bear.
The metal feels so cold against my flesh; I give a small smile, the first in a while, as I dig the blade deeper,
Unleashing my true side in those few moments that noone will ever see.
I open my mouth ever so slowly and speak the softest word-
Noone.
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noone
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2005-01-29 17:48:46]
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Re: Noone
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 06:57:45 PM AEST
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Whenever you manage to put your feelings down in words, you have succeeded. Don't stop writing. You're off to a good start.
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Re: Noone
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by Jane_Doe on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 07:37:44 PM AEST
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| Really good. Great description. |
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Re: Noone
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:19:24 PM AEST
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wonderful expression of feelings, warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Noone
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by shadowed_soul on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 01:52:54 PM AEST
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Well done. Very good poem. It makes me sad. Life should never bring you to those extremes. Like the link back to the title at the end. xxx
Melissa |
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Re: Noone
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 07:05:42 PM AEST
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| Very good poem. Your emotions come out so well in this write. Nice work. |
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Re: Noone
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by xXcrossedXx on
Saturday, 11th June 2005 @ 10:02:44 AM AEST
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Love It.
Describes much of what I feel, great write, i'd say your best. Wonderful.
Keep it up,
--amanda-- |
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