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The Only Cure
Contributed by
sir_odd87
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Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 09:23:47 PM in AEST
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I've tried lozenges
And vapor rubs
And everything in between.
But nothing helps.
Decongestants don't do squat
And neither do those pills.
None of what I've taken
Has helped me out at all.
When I breathe, I wheeze
I cough
I sneeze
My feverish head is throbbing.
The medicine I really need,
Could never be prescription
What I REALLY need
Is of a much DIFFERENT description.
I've eaten oranges,
And taken pills,
But she alone,
Can cure my ills.
Only the taste of her lips
Can soothe my scratchy throat.
Only the sight of her
Can help my burning eyes
Only the smell of her perfume
Will unplug my clogging nostrils
Only the sound of her voice
Will stop my throbbing head.
I love her, and I need her,
I have but one quandry:
What could possibly be wrong
With a little TLC?
I don't want her to catch it
But she's my ONLY cure.
She's the cure for anything
That medicine was made for.
I need you, how I need you
To stay away from me.
I don't know if I could cure it
If it passed to you from me.
Copyright ©
sir_odd87
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2005-01-29 21:23:47]
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Re: The Only Cure
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 09:37:00 PM AEST
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| LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: The Only Cure
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by B-Randy on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 09:42:19 PM AEST
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| Well, it's very..err..uh..different. Uhm..keep up the good work! |
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Re: The Only Cure
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 09:48:43 PM AEST
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| Sorry I was just laughing at subchilds comment,very funny ohhh and this was a joke as well.Right? |
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Re: The Only Cure
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 09:57:36 PM AEST
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| A Goddamn joke here |
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Re: The Only Cure
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 12:55:46 AM AEST
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| I like it....I'm sorry no one else has manners. DOn't stop writing. Please? |
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Re: The Only Cure
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by O7NeVeS on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:31:17 AM AEST
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| Well I thought it was cute, and I liked it! TD |
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Re: The Only Cure
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 04:32:11 AM AEST
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LMAO, a very cute write. I like it it's rather re-freshing from some of the poems on this site.
Good write.
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Re: The Only Cure
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 09:11:09 AM AEST
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very nice, very sincere, i enjoyed readining this . . .
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Re: The Only Cure
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:35:49 PM AEST
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awww! this is sooo sweet! *hope you feel better* hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Only Cure
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 07:48:59 PM AEST
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You could try my oranges. They could do you some good, being organic and very tasty. Barring that, well... try not to pass on the magic. She might not enjoy it.
Ah, the impractical considerations of sick minds! (by that I mean colds and flus, don't get me wrong!). I know the feeling well.
Gotta admit I smiled. Not bad, in a quirky kind of way.
Get over that cold, now, hear?
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Re: The Only Cure
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by midian on
Friday, 4th August 2006 @ 04:49:05 AM AEST
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| i can honestly say this brought a smile to my face |
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Re: The Only Cure
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by midian on
Friday, 4th August 2006 @ 04:57:37 AM AEST
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| in a good way.... oops forgot to say that :D i really liked this write it made me remember my childhood strangely |
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