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Please Hold On
Contributed by
forgottenone_iam
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Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 10:45:14 PM in AEST
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Verse 1~ When your sitting in your room
With the thoughts of dieing on your mind
cause your boyfriend cheated
and your best friend lied
your failing all your classes
and your parents fight
you dont see the reason to sleep at night
or stay awake and all you want to know
is what happened to your life
Ch~ Girl what can i tell you
we've all been there bfore
feeling like the day will never end
and no matter how hard you cry
or how loud you scream
no one comes to resucue you from this dream
but hold on
dont yet die
people need you
and love you
dont give in now
you never know what will happen next
so please hold on and dont let go.
Verse 2~ Locked in the bathroom trying to hide all the bruises
your scared to come out cause the bruses will show
weakness and pain and more is sure to come
When your dad finds out you dont put up a fight
the bullies wont leave you alone and you cant even cry
you feel like giving up and your sure no one will care
and now you just wanna die.
all you want to know is what happened to your life.
Chorse~ Boy, what can i tell you we've all been
there before feeling like the day will never end
and no matter how hard you cry or how loud you scream
no one comes to rescue you from this dream
but hold on
dont yet die
people need you
and love you
dont give in now
you never know what will happen next
so please hold on and dont let go.
please dont let go
please dont let go
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Re: Please Hold On
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by CurtisC on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 11:01:22 PM AEST
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i thought it was pretty good, it has a great message and it's real clear what it is. excellent job.
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Re: Please Hold On
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by killingmehslowly on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 11:09:49 PM AEST
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| excellent poem..Great meaning, great purpose. |
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Re: Please Hold On
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 04:42:07 PM AEST
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| exceleent song keep writing ~chrissy |
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