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From Muspelheim to Niflheim (I and II)

Contributed by Xnoybis on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:54:38 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I - Muspelheim - The Land of Fire

Fires raging
Flame rivers flow
Scourging everything
Overran below

The sky is dark
With ash and smoke
Blankets the land
In a long flowing cloak

Chared dead trees
Point to the sky
Like skeletal fingers
Set to defy

The ground is gray
With bones of the dead
Of those who dared brave
This Fire Godhead

II - Niflheim - The Land of Ice

Everything entombed
In great displays of Ice
Shards shine like diamonds
Set to entice

The sky is gray
Solemn and stark
And has swallowed the souls
Of many bear-sarks

Huge mountains reach
To the void in the sky
Embrace mighty rock
To cast down like die

The ground is frozen
Encasing souls of dead
Of those who dared brave
This Ice Godhead

Copyright © Xnoybis ... [ 2005-01-30 01:54:38]
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Re: From Muspelheim to Niflheim (I and II) (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 07:19:37 PM AEST
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Good imagery..
Jenni

Re: From Muspelheim to Niflheim (I and II) (User Rating: 1 )
by chefhmboyrd on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 04:46:53 PM AEST
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I love the Fire and Ice comparison. Great visuals

Re: From Muspelheim to Niflheim (I and II) (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 09:42:56 PM AEST
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That is awesome how you had the ice poem and the fire poem right there. Great way to compare... poem to poem. Nice everything in here. These were all around great writes...
Jodi

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