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My Revenge, My Demise
Contributed by
Vigilante006
on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 11:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I'm battered and bruised; he's left his mark
Wounds inflicted under cover of dark
Fresh gashes mingle with old scars
Bones are broken and flesh is charred
Many times I've escaped, thought I was free
But always I'm hunted (he's after me)
Please help me to break all these chains
So I can turn and fight against this pain
I've had enough of his scorn and contempt
I must have the revenge of which I've dreamt
I must tear off these shackles holding me down
I must dethrone this cruel killer and demolish his crown
With a SNAP the chains break, at last I am free
Free to destroy the one who tortured me
The roles are reversed, now I'M behind
As he flees from my wrath, his death on his mind
He's cornered at last, my vengeance is near
He slinks back from me, as above him I sneer
His eyes look to mine, something gleams inside
But nothing else matters, as long as he dies
The hour has come; retribution will be mine!
I raise my broken sword and scream a battle cry
The sword slices down and sweeps off his head
But when the dust settles, there I lay...dead
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2002-12-07 23:30:00]
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Re: My Revenge, My Demise
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 12:14:58 AM AEST
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| Whoa! Chilly stuff! Good write. Enjoyed this. |
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Re: My Revenge, My Demise
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by LJ on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 02:47:38 AM AEST
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Whoa is right!
It just catches ya off guard.
Nice Write |
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Re: My Revenge, My Demise
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by OreO on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 02:57:51 AM AEST
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This is deep, dark , and mysterious....i like it alot. it's sad ...and i know this place all to well...thanks for sharing this one..
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: My Revenge, My Demise
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 03:30:47 AM AEST
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I think I speak for the ppl... This poem ROCKS. Very well written very chilling and haunting reminded me of the movie 'Enough' with J. Lo Very good stuff keep it up!
- Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: My Revenge, My Demise
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Thursday, 17th July 2003 @ 12:14:28 PM AEST
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| You are such a good writer. Your work speaks to me. |
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