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The Movement Of Time
Contributed by
pyrofungus
on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 05:57:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Shades of gray
Left upon this old wooden tray
Oh no
Its just dust from memories long ago forgotten
Wipe them away
To stop the infection
As the nose begins to itch
A little less awake now
A little less aware
But the cells begin to scrap off
From all of this scratching
Such nonsense
The memories they still exist in time
Floating away into the air
As they no longer stand upon this old wooden tray
Existing in movement
The movement of time
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2005-01-30 17:57:49]
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Re: The Movement Of Time
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 06:05:24 PM AEST
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| Very good write..I liked the feel you had going on..Your last line was very good..A good end to a good post. |
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Re: The Movement Of Time
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 06:22:06 PM AEST
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| excellent job on this one summer. this had a psychotic feel to it, which i liked. very nice. |
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