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A Friend?
Contributed by
Fwog
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Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 05:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I once met one
Who spoke to me of life and poetry,
The trusting hand of friendship
She extended to me.
With laughter shared, sometimes a tear
Our friendship it did grow,
We exchanged thoughts across the web
On life's strange ebb's and flow.
She spoke of truth and honesty
And of the grander plan,
Of how at times throughout one's life
You have to make a stand.
But then one day a message came
A message hard and cold,
Cut the act, don't speak to me
Our friendship it did fold.
There was no rhyme or reason
And though I made a heartfelt plea,
The hand of trust and friendship
She now withdrew from me.
One must respect one's wishes
It is their choice in the end,
But it's left me in a quandry
How does one define a friend?
Copyright ©
Fwog
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2002-12-08 05:40:00]
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Re: A Friend?
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by Roshie on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 05:58:49 AM AEST
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| This is so sad, yet it happens a lot in 'friendship'. Although sad this is a lovely poem, thanx for sharing it. *hugz* |
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Re: A Friend?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 07:38:25 AM AEST
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A really lovely poem, Dallas,..tho very sad.. Not knowing is always hard....
Your friend,
Jenni |
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Re: A Friend?
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by Mystery_Girl on
Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 08:24:37 AM AEST
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| Unfortunately there are no guarantees with friendships, love or even just life.....Good write....Tanya........... |
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Re: A Friend?
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 06:48:05 AM AEST
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Dearest Dallas @-<-<<
A friend is a blanket when nights are cold;
a friend sticketh close as we grow old....
Your friend always Nessa |
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Re: A Friend?
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by capergirl_23 on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 08:58:25 AM AEST
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Really liked you poem, where it reminded me of a particular friendship that ended quite abruptly at one time not long ago. And I love your ending question ~ "How does one define a friend"?~ Where we may all have our own definitions. When friendship ends with no explanation, as human, we ask- Were they ever our true 'friends' in the first place? And makes us question what it is a friend is really suppose to be...
Really liked your poem, I am sure a lot of people will be able to relate.
Thanks for sharing~
Tracey
Keep Smilin' :) |
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Re: A Friend?
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 03:54:48 PM AEST
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| oh, Dallas, how sad this is to read, how sad to think one could be so cold, you have a wonderful heart, keep up the good work |
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Re: A Friend?
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by kegs04 on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 07:39:44 PM AEST
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hey great poem, very sad tho, my brother is kinda going thru the same thing, except in person..keep up the great work
~peace out
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