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Hand wash only
Contributed by
LevyMetal
on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 08:13:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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the window rolls down
the cigarette burns out
i'll never be able to hold that again.
it was october weather
i needed a nap and a steamy shower
i hope i'll never smell like that again.
but as the last band played
even the night wavered in your favor
all i wanted was to be near you.
every breath was held
until you cracked that smile from hell
i hate to think i'll never see it again.
hands down, im on the ground
i bet i looked like a fool
every drink, every minute
man, i must have been wrapped up in it
so who could of loved me when i was like that?
now there i was in your car
gandering bad thoughts in spontanous circles
you kept saying you were hungry
i kept thinking it was all the same
even though it was only that, then
i would sacrafice, your call, to have it now
every indent on both of our hands
fit so well when cradled together
months have gone on
here i am still undone
what was so different about you?
i need to move on
just let me drive home
or take the gun and shoot before i do
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2005-01-30 20:13:31]
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Re: Hand wash only
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by Jane_Doe on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 01:49:28 AM AEST
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| Wow, thats sad and really emotionally loaded. I loved the repeated 'I'll never....again' and how things just flowed. It was great. |
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