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Burning Candle
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 09:54:10 PM in AEST
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Look at this
Candle
Burning from both
Ends
This is my
Life
Melting away
My skin
This candle is
Hallow
Just like my
Soul
Unlike my family
Theirs burn slow
Mine burns from both ends
I'm not the same
And they'll never understand
Why...
I lit a second flame
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
... [
2005-01-30 21:54:10]
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Re: Burning Candle
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 09:58:23 PM AEST
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| woot! i just had to say that. amazing. simple stunning last stanza. |
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Re: Burning Candle
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by emystar on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 10:33:27 PM AEST
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Very sad but life goes on.
Keep the faith.
hugs,
emy |
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Re: Burning Candle
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 12:34:05 AM AEST
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never understand why I lit another flame....
THAT...is an inspired line.
Veyr well done
Larry |
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