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Shooting Star
Contributed by
sean88
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Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 12:25:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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It was as beautiful
As a shooting star
When it first began,
It shined with hope
Across my sky
And gave new life to my plan,
It brightened every
Dark filled space
That hid within my mind,
But by doing this
I became nave
And effectively became blind,
Not conscious of other goings on
Or indeed
The clues I was handed,
I turned my back chose to ignore
And now my life
Has been left stranded
Copyright ©
sean88
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2005-01-31 12:25:18]
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Re: Shooting Star
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by Stitch on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 01:12:33 PM AEST
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Isn't it like that? Most things that seem too good to be true usually are. Nice write.
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Re: Shooting Star
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 01:36:21 PM AEST
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| Beautiful thoughts. I'm always trying to fight the same thing. Well expressed. Blessings. |
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Re: Shooting Star
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 06:06:04 PM AEST
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The tragedy of iorny, this is a beautiful peice of writting, from a heart wounded by love and yet,
willing 2 reveal it's self . . .
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