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Schools
Contributed by
jthzero
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Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 04:01:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
schoolproblems
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Some days the days are not long
Though the years go on like an eternal song
Collection all knowledge to possess conformance
The true power lay dormant
Heat of the creative power echoes off the minds ignoring walls
The ethereal spark lost in the dead halls
Only a true Prometheus can break the minds entombing cases
To stop the students from being lost to the united songs nameless faces
Only to break the students song of the soulless clock tower
Thus giving life to the sleeping power
Leaving the students the will from the broken song
The earth trembles to the songs, for their kind do not last long
So is the fate of those with the broken songs bound to their souls
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jthzero
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2005-01-31 16:01:18]
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Re: Schools
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by noone on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 04:35:09 PM AEST
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I have to admit, i needed to read it through again as i didn't understand some bits at first, but maybe thats due to my young age,lol. It is a good poem, also some interesting use of words. Well done, keep writing
kirsty xx |
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