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what's the piont?
Contributed by
morgana
on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 05:26:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Whats the point?
My pian will always come back
So why am I still cutting?
Just because I you made me mad
I always blamed you
For all the terrible things I do
When Im the one to blame
This cutting I do
Makes no sense
All Im doing is showing
How much of a coward I am
Instead of telling you whats wrong
I ***** and moan
Complain all day
And make myself dread coming home
Knowing all along
All my pain is my fault
So whats the point ?
This makes no sense
I cut myself
And for a minute feel free
But the paranoia it causes
Is too heavy
So whats the pointif afterwards
All my pain comes back full force!?
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morgana
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2005-01-31 17:26:42]
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Re: what's the piont?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 06:52:45 PM AEST
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| Good write. Very emotional. I liked it. |
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Re: what's the piont?
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by noone on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:45:58 PM AEST
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A very good write. Feelings conveyed throughout. I know what it's like to feel free from the pain but it only lasts a wee while then it's gone. I think sometimes why do i keep doing it, as it does make you paranoid afterwards and you also feel the pressure and pain double. Things will work out in the end...hopefully. Keep writing, you have talent.
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