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Departure
Contributed by
Taurusgem1
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Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 07:11:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Honored by her peers
Quietly she takes center stage
Frightened excitement fills her eyes
Offsetting her caramel complexion
Glistening the rose of her cheeks
So much has happened in the years past
A life time of memories swirl through the air
Frosting everyones mind as stories are told
Smiling intensely
She awkwardly thanks those who have helped her
Imprints flash through her mind
Displaying the stepping stones of experience that got her here
Some familiar faces are missing
Saddened she prints up their pictures within her heart
Colorfully drawing their faces with her liquid voice
Others there, follow her visions
Looking back at what they have seen
Feeling each fluid emotion
Bleeding into their souls through her lyrical paintings
Laughing quietly she sits
Applause, erupt a violent hum throughout the room
Instantly she knows her time was not wasted
With a slightly upward cornered mouth
A whispered thanks sweeps out
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Re: Departure
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by emystar on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 07:25:36 PM AEST
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Sounds like a fairy tale coming true. it's sotta like Cindarela.
Still it grabs u and lifts ya up and says it was worth all the leasons, pain, agony each sleepless night, falling, getting back up but jus knowing life-n-it's ups, downs, tradjugy 'cause some one cared enough to have faith in her even tho she was a very hard nut to crack.
A masterpeice in it's own right. Very powerfull.
huggs,
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Re: Departure
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:34:05 AM AEST
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| Excellent write. You painted such a clear image with your great words. Nice work. I really enjoyed this poem. |
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Re: Departure
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 10:41:07 AM AEST
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Such a lovely capture of a special moment. I could picture it in detail. Just lovely.
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Re: Departure
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by PumpkinPie on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:29:15 PM AEST
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Yes indeed,excellent piece (((yet again!)))Your way of making each verse come alive makes this poem simply riveting.
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