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Paradise found
Contributed by
dream_protector_bp
on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 08:20:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The sandy beach
the laping waves
on sparkling shores
of crystal sand
this is paradise finally found
this is paradise all around
The darkened skies
the stormy night
bright lightning clash
thunder and rain
this is paradise for wich we sought
this is paradise we've finallly caught
The windy days
on grassy plains
sway with the breeze
and rolling clouds
this is paradise dreamed to be
this is our paradise--you and me
The perfect night
the wind and rain
the snow and sun
the fire's flame
the embers lit for all to see
whispy shapes of what could be
on this night our love will gleam
like sundown on a diamond sea
to fullfill our lives, hopes and dreams
together, forever...you and me.
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dream_protector_bp
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2005-01-31 20:20:17]
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Re: Paradise found
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 08:45:31 PM AEST
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| this is beautiful.... aside from a couple of spelling errors, it is very well written |
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Re: Paradise found
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by shelby on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 09:23:13 PM AEST
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a light airy beat with this and I liked the style Im not sure but I think they may have been typing boo boo's Iv done it all day but it didnt take away from the over all nature of this wonderful poem
Michelle |
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Re: Paradise found
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by O7NeVeS on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 10:30:13 PM AEST
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| Great write! I liked this poem. TD |
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Re: Paradise found
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 01:50:59 AM AEST
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| Beautiful write. I went to Italy last summer and it was absolutely gorgeous. You described everything so well. Nice work :-) |
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