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Bitter Woman
Contributed by
taurusgem1
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Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 11:05:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Your words
Can you hear them?
Vile, sour smelling
Spilling out of your tight-pursed lips like spoiled milk
Looking into your eyes
There is nothing
Nothing good.
Black tar pupils
Piercing stare
Cackling scares the silence
Your entrance
Train wreck in a meadow
What have you brought us today?
Insecure heart
Rotten apple core
Copyright ©
taurusgem1
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2005-01-31 23:05:50]
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Re: Bitter Woman
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by shelby on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 11:17:19 PM AEST
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very deep I love the intensity
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Re: Bitter Woman
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by quill_and_ink on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:21:27 AM AEST
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| Your language truly works well to express your dark and deep thoughts. You truly portray a bitter woman. well done! |
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Re: Bitter Woman
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:38:42 AM AEST
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| Awesome write. I love your usage of words. It's so fitting. I look forward to reading many more from you. |
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