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A Bit of Pain
Contributed by
brokensoulx09
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Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 11:07:00 PM in AEST
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why do I feel this pain,
this pain that's everyday,
my hair's soaked from the rain,
and it's led me to say...
my pain has taken over me,
it has made me want to be,
how you all see me,
but why can't I be,
so why can't I be,
why can't I be...me?
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2005-01-31 23:07:00]
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Re: A Bit of Pain
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by shelby on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 11:19:36 PM AEST
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very sad and ya know what? To hell with them move on and up and just be yourself others will always try to mold you follow your own path it will be the right one
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Re: A Bit of Pain
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by quill_and_ink on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 01:19:04 AM AEST
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| You have a good moral to your poem i just wish that there could have been more to express what has led you to feel this way. Good write nonetheless:) |
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