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The Garden
Contributed by
quill_and_ink
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:27:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The Garden was in full bloom that Spring,
the sun and their spirits were high.
Together they would laugh and sing,
and watch the clouds sail by.
The old trees were long-standing,
the flowers exquisitely wild,
and on the river's landing,
stood hand-in-hand, mother and child.
Yet the sunshine couldn't last,
although the child did not know,
The blue sky became overcast,
as the mother had to go.
The child left to question why,
the sunshine had been taken.
The garden, left to die,
will forever lie forsaken.
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Re: The Garden
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:34:26 AM AEST
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This is a very tender yet powerfull write.
It's a masterpeice of beauty-n-wisdom.
huggs,
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Re: The Garden
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 07:14:57 PM AEST
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heartbreakingly beautiful, i am very moved... hugs n' love nessa
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