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Goodbye
Contributed by
redtempest13
on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 02:05:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The tears run softly down my cheeks.
I cannot wipe them away.
I'm missing the part of me that cares,
I'm missing a piece of my heart.
My soul has been ripped in two,
My life-force drained away.
All because I was stupid,
I gave the man my heart.
I only got half back,
His is still together.
He doesn't care anymore,
So neither do I.
Goodbye.....
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2005-02-01 02:05:45]
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Re: Goodbye
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 02:44:20 AM AEST
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very sad but a masterpeice as our world is full of this today.
keep writing.
huggs,
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Re: Goodbye
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by bluebird on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 06:18:15 AM AEST
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dont say that. no guy is worth wasting the rest of your life. be strong and show him what he's missing out on!!
beautiful write
~keep the faith~
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