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Totalitarianism Messiah
Contributed by
classicfailedhero
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 02:42:44 AM in AEST
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No closure through retracted afterthoughts,
Or self distinguishing.
Break on through & discover,
How many have left their rings on the wall.
Conformity as a rag,
Wiping away the Oedipus Rex &,
Any hope of rusting.
Join a crowd
'You'll find it warmer'.
Individuality,
'Catalyst for loneliness.'
(Black & white rainbows.
Not even art represents vague colours anymore)
Emotions amplified through grafittied faces,
Blue banners of neutrality.
Uncomplete, disillusioned puzzles of obsenities in eyes.
Here is my acceptance speach.
Copyright ©
classicfailedhero
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2005-02-01 02:42:44]
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Re: Totalitarianism Messiah
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 02:55:02 AM AEST
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wow now u said a mouthfull in this one. A couple of words that I'd have to get dictionary to understand but hey I get the jist of this jus fine.
someone got the blue ribbon.
Awesome even tho a bit mysterious it's still a rokin write.
huggs, smile,
emy |
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Re: Totalitarianism Messiah
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:35:04 AM AEST
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| Very nice. |
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Re: Totalitarianism Messiah
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by Taurusgem1 on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:51:05 AM AEST
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| Gret Expression!!!Loved the visual as well as the essance! |
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