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My 1st Love
Contributed by
ROUGE
on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 08:49:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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My love is like a river that flows to your heart,
Which deeply connects us when we are apart.
My love is like the high clouds;
Way up there,
So you know now that it wont ever disappear.
My love is like the warmth of a mother's care.
That is scared, precious and very rare.
My love is as bright as the golden sun,
And as calm and silent when the day is done.
My love is as pure as the rain from God's sky,
And as sure as you'll find any desert;
Hot, windy and dry.
My love is something that is hard to get rid of,
That thing I constantly do;
MY LOVE IS my bad habit,
Cause I cant stop loving you.
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ROUGE
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2005-02-01 20:49:35]
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Re: My 1st Love
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by dreamer_for_eternity on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 08:54:53 PM AEST
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| not really my thing, but its pretty good, it'd b better if i could concentrate on poetry a lil more, but right now im tired, good write tho |
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Re: My 1st Love
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by veruca on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 09:11:42 PM AEST
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wow! i love this!!! i have had similar things. Its good that u dont have any regrets. i do. i even wrote a poem about it. well i loved this. it is the best that i have read today. check out some of my poems too
kisses**~~
chelsea
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Re: My 1st Love
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by O7NeVeS on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 10:48:00 PM AEST
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| I thought this was really good! Thanks for sharing! TD |
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