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Dang
Contributed by
lilschizoboy07
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Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 08:58:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I used to write all my poems
to praise the heavenly thing that is a woman
I used to write litttle letters that she never saw
and leave little cluesthat she never followed
I used to have my poems reviewed regularly
but before I I knew I was afraid I was being annoyingly clingy
I want to confess to...
oh forget it
It's nothing important, just a crush I've had since grade 8
but now it's just an iea of love that my mind ate
the shadows of my subconscious well with sadness and hate
while my self-esteem lies brutally broken like glass in a shaken crate
I'm overwhelmed by the different me's I've tried to xcreate
trying so hard to hide
what might actually be a cool guy inside
so all thes half-baked personalities just get a free ride
Sometimes I think if I was truly schizophrenic, joy would be mine
After all, I would always have company, right?
At least I can't be abandoned by myself in times of strife
As far as love goes, these grapes still aren't ripe
emotionally and sexually
I guess I unintentionally
made an analysis of myself that no doctor will ever see
released a part of me I don't even want to be seen
so to punish my brain I'll fry it with some TV
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lilschizoboy07
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2005-02-01 20:58:54]
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Re: Dang
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by dreamer_for_eternity on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 09:02:26 PM AEST
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its original,
its good,
its something new...
what grade r u in now? how long has this "love" lasted, well good write, might want to clarify how long u've been in love tho because for all we know, you could be still in grade 8 |
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Re: Dang
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by lilschizoboy07 on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 10:14:35 PM AEST
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FYI:I'm in grade 10 now, mates!
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